A writer in her native habitat

[applecameron]

cortese mentioned something about the 'Scotch' story linked in the previous post, and that got us onto a chinwag about brevity, and the usual assessment that the haiku is my native habitat.

Then, silly me, I said the two words 'pornographic' and 'haiku'.

15 minutes later --

Two haiku, variations on a theme.

Author: Apple Cameron
Fandom: Hornblower
Pairing: H.H. A.K.
Spoilers: What, in a haiku? Even I would have to work a little at that. (No, wait, *squints for a moment*...yeah, I could do it. That wouldn't be hard, actually. It's all about word choice, baby.)



Together,
Their bodies surging like surf;
Archie's face pink under his.





Together,
Their bodies surging like surf;
Archie's cock swells in his mouth.